This is a record of a class blog at Edmund Hillary School, Auckland, New Zealand.
Thursday, 31 August 2017
The Great white Shark is extremely dangerous.
It has a humongous amount of razor sharp teeth.
The great white shark has freaky black eyes on the side off his head.
He has five pountney fins.
The Great white has white on his boat and grey on the top.
He has a long fin tali and a pointy nose.
The Great White Shark moves slowly when hunting its prey.
The Great White has gills on the side of his body to breath.
The Great White Shark likes to eat seals ‘ crea fish ‘ people ‘ wales and sometimes other sharks.
The Great White Shark doesn't stop sleep or it won't be able to breath but it still sleeps.
The Great White shark is one of my favorite sea creatures.
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